Mellody's point of view

It's been a year since my divorce with my cheating ex Tommy what a jerk I go to Kaylin's house for a little bit come home and see my husband cheating on me god I hate him and I'm never going back with him again I've trusted him with all my heart and he cheated on me I'm now looking for the right person who will love me and never lie or cheat on me. My thoughts was inaroppted by a knock on the door I walk, over to the door and open, it "hi Michael hi Kaylin and hi there Paris how's my fave Lil girl going have you been good for mommy and daddy?" "Yes she has been good" Kaylin said with a smile on her face.

" I got to tickets to prince and I was wondering if you would like to come with me since Marie is sick today?" Kaylin ask with a big smile on her face.

"Yeah sure I'd love to come with you" I said with a big smile on my face.

I'm sorry this is very short but is this a good way to start my story or should I redo the beginning

Lots of love,

MichaelJacksonfan108❤